suggestions for IMHO better text

[espinielli]

• moved "emphasis mine" before the quoted text because it read strange otherwise.
• added IMHO a missing "a"
• avoided repetition of too many "figure" in a couple of contiguous sentences

HTH

[clauswilke]

I can't merge this without a clear copyright assignment in the commit message. See here: https://serialmentor.com/dataviz/ (bottom of the page)

Also, there shouldn't be a space between (emphasis mine) and :.

[espinielli]

reworded commit message

[clauswilke]

Thanks, fixed on my end.