Closed daveliepmann closed 6 years ago
👍 +1 "required for first-time coaches".
@daveliepmann feel free to update the wiki page: https://github.com/clojurebridge-berlin/organization/wiki/%5Bemail%5D-Coaches-Training-Reminder
I have made some edits and trimmed down the email!
The new format looks great.
I wanted to attend the training (sorry I missed it!) but I only quickly skimmed the email to find the date/time, and then put the wrong date in my calendar, as the first and most obvious date mentioned was that of ClojureBridge itself, rather than of the training night which was the subject of the email. It's my fault for not reading carefully, but the new version will make this mistake not possible, thanks @daiyi :).
Thanks @daiyi! I think we can close this.
The reminder email for the coaches' training is indirect and therefore unnecessarily ambiguous about the mandatory nature of the training. We suggest they go, using bold:
...but recommendations, no matter how heavy, are not the same as mandatory. However we suggest later that it is in fact not just recommended but a requirement to coach:
If it's mandatory (with exceptions), shouldn't we come out and say so in bold? If it's not, shouldn't we remove the word "mandatory"?