cloudmesh-community / hid-sp18-523

Tandon, Ritesh
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puppet #16

Open laszewsk opened 5 years ago

laszewsk commented 5 years ago

first comments done during fast read

https://github.com/cloudmesh-community/book/blob/master/chapters/devops/puppet.md

I need to work on something else otherwise i would have done changes myself

laszewsk commented 5 years ago

ps i already made several changes

tandon-ritz commented 5 years ago

Thanks for update and providing valuable suggestion for improving paper quality.

I have made below changes as per your suggestion and sent you pull request.

fixed use of a and the fixed grammatical error capitalization consistency in heading Remove below and following in sentences Added more relevant content Modified content for clarification where needed.

Would you please merge puppet.bib file in bib folder so that I can send pull request for bib reference changes also.

Thanks for all the help.

tandon-ritz commented 5 years ago

Thanks for providing next set of reviews. I have worked on those review comments and sent you pull request. Following changes were made

Fixed more sentences with incorrect use of a and the

Added explanation of monolithic and split installation

Reduce usage of bullets and headings

Added content of configuration

Added content and improved bottom sections of paper

I have yet to remove bib references from .md file. Please let me know when puppet.bib file is added under book/bib folder. I will remove references from md and add in there.

Thanks fo your guidance in improving paper.