[ko] A report to track and reflect updates of English content

github-actions[bot] commented 1 year ago

This is an issue to track and reflect updates of English content. Please, check the files below as they may have been improved.

NOTICE - The following outdated content should be resolved before the next L10n branch updates.

Files to check

[ ] cloud-computing.md

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cloud-computing.md

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```diff diff --git a/content/en/cloud-computing.md b/content/en/cloud-computing.md index 0fd673f..708c9b6 100644 --- a/content/en/cloud-computing.md +++ b/content/en/cloud-computing.md @@ -7,21 +7,17 @@ tags: ["infrastructure", "fundamental", ""] ## What it is -Cloud computing is a model that offers compute resources like CPU, network, and disk capabilities on-demand over the internet. -Cloud computing gives users the ability to access and use computing power in a remote physical location. -Cloud providers like AWS, GCP, Azure, DigitalOcean, and others all offer third parties -the ability to rent access to compute resources in multiple geographic locations. +Cloud computing offers compute resources like CPU, network, and disk capabilities on-demand over the internet, allowing users to access and use computing power in a remote physical location. +We generally differentiate between private and public cloud, depending on whether the cloud infrastructure is exclusively dedicated to an organization or shared for open public services. ## Problem it addresses -Organizations traditionally faced two main problems when attempting to expand their use of computing power. -They either acquire, support, design, and pay for facilities -to host their physical servers and network or expand and maintain those facilities. -Cloud computing allows organizations to outsource some portion of their computing needs to another organization. +Organizations traditionally faced two main challenges when attempting to expand computing power. +They could either acquire, support, and design (new) facilities to host their physical servers and network or expand and maintain existing ones. +Cloud computing solves that challenge by allowing organizations to outsource some of their computing needs. ## How it helps -Cloud providers offer organizations the ability to rent compute resources on-demand and pay for usage. -This allows for two major innovations: -Organizations can focus on their product or service without waiting, planning, and spending resources on new physical infrastructure. They can simply [scale](/scalability/) as needed and on-demand. +Cloud providers allow organizations to rent compute resources on-demand and pay for usage, delivering two key benefits. +First, organizations can focus on their product or service without waiting, planning, and spending resources on new physical infrastructure. And second, they can simply [scale](/scalability/) on-demand as needed. Cloud computing allows organizations to adopt as much or as little infrastructure as they need. ```

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seokho-son commented 1 year ago

@yunkon-kim 의도한 시점에 생성된 이슈가 맞나요~? :)

yunkon-kim commented 1 year ago

@seokho-son

분석해보니 #2025 PR에서 아래 조건이 성립되어 Workflow가 동작하였습니다.

on: 
  pull_request:
    branches:
      - 'dev-ko' # add other branches or use wildcard 'dev-**'
    paths:
      - 'content/en/**.md'

워크플로우에 관심있으신 분들이 있을까하여 추가 부연 설명을 드립니다 ^^

일반적으로 한글화 기여를 하는 경우,
기여 브랜치에 있는 하나의 content/ko/xxx.md 파일을 dev-ko 브랜치에 Merge하기 위해 PR을 오픈한다면 워크플로우가 트리거되지 않습니다.

그런데, 위 PR에서는 (main의?) content/en/xxx.md 파일이 dev-ko에 Merge 되는 형태 이기 때문에 워크플로우가 동작하였습니다.

main의 최신 내용을 dev-ko에 반영하는 상황과 동일한 현상이 발생했다고 보셔도 무방할 것 같습니다 ^^;;

seokho-son commented 1 year ago

@yunkon-kim 음. .그렇군요. 일단 의도한 형태는 아니었네요. 기여자가 base를 잘못 선택하는 일이 흔한편이라, 어떻게 개선하는 것이 좋을지 고민이됩니다. :)

seokho-son commented 1 year ago

혹시 dev-ko와 main이 모두 관련되어 있는 PR에서만 동작하게 하면 되려나요? (dev-ko를 rebase 해서 올린 PR은 또 문제가 있겠지만.. ㅎㅎ)

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