Improve carrot copy - Githubissues

code4policy / bad-veggies-website-section-a

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Open dmil opened 5 months ago

dmil commented 5 months ago

Improve the copy on the carrots paragraph. Don't modify the source for the link though, that's a separate ticket (#14).

Besides the source we link out to, how can we improve the copy on this paragraph?

Jalutka commented 5 months ago

The author needs to remember the importance of the Elements of Style!

ashao56 commented 5 months ago

got it!