Improve carrot copy - Githubissues

code4policy / bad-veggies-website-section-a

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Open dmil opened 10 months ago

dmil commented 10 months ago

Improve the copy on the carrots paragraph. Don't modify the source for the link though, that's a separate ticket (#14).

Besides the source we link out to, how can we improve the copy on this paragraph?

Jalutka commented 10 months ago

The author needs to remember the importance of the Elements of Style!

ashao56 commented 10 months ago

got it!