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New wording. 43 words shorter
Volunteering is all about making a difference and having fun while doing it. You don't need to worry about being the perfect fit - just bring your willingness to help out, and you're good to go!
We welcome people from all walks of life, whether you're a seasoned pro or just starting out. Maybe you're already seasoned, or perhaps you're looking to learn something new - either way, there's a place for you here.
So go ahead, dive into volunteering with enthusiasm, and let's make a positive impact together!
Contribute what you can, when you can, and know that your efforts are appreciated.
New wording. 43 words shorter
Volunteering is all about making a difference and having fun while doing it. You don't need to worry about being the perfect fit - just bring your willingness to help out, and you're good to go!
We welcome people from all walks of life, whether you're a seasoned pro or just starting out. Maybe you're already seasoned, or perhaps you're looking to learn something new - either way, there's a place for you here.
So go ahead, dive into volunteering with enthusiasm, and let's make a positive impact together!
Contribute what you can, when you can, and know that your efforts are appreciated.
suggesting
We welcome people from all walks of life, whether you're a seasoned pro or just starting out. Maybe you're already seasoned, or perhaps you're looking to learn something new - either way, there's a place for you here.
to
We welcome people from all walks of life. Whether you're a seasoned pro, just starting out, or looking to learn something new, there's a place for you here.
because whether you're a seasoned pro or just starting out. Maybe you're already seasoned,
is redundant
I didn't notice it. Good point !
On Mon, Feb 12, 2024 at 5:18 PM Jared Krajewski @.***> wrote:
New wording. 43 words shorter
Volunteering is all about making a difference and having fun while doing it. You don't need to worry about being the perfect fit - just bring your willingness to help out, and you're good to go!
We welcome people from all walks of life, whether you're a seasoned pro or just starting out. Maybe you're already seasoned, or perhaps you're looking to learn something new - either way, there's a place for you here.
So go ahead, dive into volunteering with enthusiasm, and let's make a positive impact together!
Contribute what you can, when you can, and know that your efforts are appreciated.
suggesting
We welcome people from all walks of life, whether you're a seasoned pro or just starting out. Maybe you're already seasoned, or perhaps you're looking to learn something new - either way, there's a place for you here.
to
We welcome people from all walks of life. Whether you're a seasoned pro, just starting out, or looking to learn something new, there's a place for you here.
because whether you're a seasoned pro or just starting out. Maybe you're already seasoned, is redundant
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Okay, here's what it looks like now.
The Volunteer
button at the bottom looked a bit off to me so I adjusted the margins depending on screen size. Imo it looks a little more consistent when changing viewports. Can always revert it, though.
Should we try to place all in 2 text blocks? It doesn’t look to great to me or what do you think?
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Okay, here's what it looks like now. Capture.PNG (view on web) https://github.com/codeforpdx/codepdx_website/assets/83156697/1354e759-7eac-4eec-a5d3-bcefcdc82241 Capture2.PNG (view on web) https://github.com/codeforpdx/codepdx_website/assets/83156697/c4534d80-c9cf-4120-8283-9cb5f50f66c4
The Volunteer button at the bottom looked a bit off to me so I adjusted the margins depending on screen size. Imo it looks a little more consistent when changing viewports. Can always revert it, though.
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Should we try to place all in 2 text blocks? It doesn’t look to great to me or what do you think? … On Mon, Feb 12, 2024 at 18:53 Andy Williams @.> wrote: Okay, here's what it looks like now. Capture.PNG (view on web) https://github.com/codeforpdx/codepdx_website/assets/83156697/1354e759-7eac-4eec-a5d3-bcefcdc82241 Capture2.PNG (view on web) https://github.com/codeforpdx/codepdx_website/assets/83156697/c4534d80-c9cf-4120-8283-9cb5f50f66c4 The Volunteer button at the bottom looked a bit off to me so I adjusted the margins depending on screen size. Imo it looks a little more consistent when changing viewports. Can always revert it, though. — Reply to this email directly, view it on GitHub <#122 (comment)>, or unsubscribe https://github.com/notifications/unsubscribe-auth/AW5R3GBU57V3PG5ZOWTVFO3YTLIT5AVCNFSM6AAAAABDEDWICKVHI2DSMVQWIX3LMV43OSLTON2WKQ3PNVWWK3TUHMYTSNBQGMZTSOBWGQ . You are receiving this because your review was requested.Message ID: @.>
2 makes sense to me.
Added the component and reduced to two lines.
I also trimmed the text a little more. Let me know what you think.
Nice! Looks good
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This PR:
Resolves #117
Replaces single sentence with fuller description.
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Opening as a draft to get feedback. This is a much larger piece of text and I don't know if people think it takes up too much room now, at least on mobile. Or maybe it can be trimmed to some extent.