colindamelio / saraswati

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fix: Copy Updates #19

Closed johnathanfong closed 6 years ago

johnathanfong commented 6 years ago

Most of these are per Frances' request. I've tried my best to harmonize the content so it feels consistent voice/tone. Let me know if anything sounds really unnatural or breaks the flow of narrative.

cc @JesseNoseworthy @nsbtr @colindamelio