Speedrunning proposed issues

In my last edit, I received feedback about the article from my peers and professor and realized that I left a few errors in my writing when I considered it finished. Here is a list of the issues I plan to correct:

Place an En dash between many and both in the TL;DR so it looks like "lives of many-both within..."

"Googled" is not an official word so change it to "searched online" or simply "searched"
"... the game" is used twice in P2S1 (Paragraph 2 Sentence 1, will use this structure from now on) so remove one, most likely "breeze through the game
Overlooked a phrasing issue in P2S1, it is currently written as "stuck on, the "noob bridge and is it named." It should be changed to "stuck on; the "noob bridge" as it is named."
There is an awkward phrase in P2S6 written as "... google (will change this) where all of the items in the game were and the most efficient way to get them." Make the emphasis on this sentence on finidng the optimal way to get the items; rephrase this as "search online for guide describing how to efficiently acquire all of the items in the game.

I believe the rest is alright, more edits are welcome