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Paragraph 2 suggestions #8

Closed geerc closed 7 years ago

geerc commented 7 years ago

Line 4: "and been called out for it but I don't believe it's" --> "and been called out for it, but I don't believe it's"

Line 7-8: "Our view on plagiarism must be unanimously against it so that we can start taking action against it" --> I see what you're saying, but I feel it could be stated a little more clearly. One possible suggestion is "Schools must be openly and unanimously against plagiarism, and then we can begin to take action", or something alike.

comptonb37 commented 7 years ago

Thanks again for the feedback, both issues have been attended to and fixed.