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Open vanslykej opened 7 years ago

vanslykej commented 7 years ago

In the commit 8bde622c5ce4a04d239308a653189402d3122e70, there are a few issues:

I would add a little more detail about why specifically students are becoming lazier
I would either fix the picture or pick a new one since it is blurry
Possibly more detail about what specifically students look up on google

cookc3174 commented 7 years ago

Yeah I have been having problems with the picture. I am still in the process of finding a new one.

cookc3174 commented 7 years ago

I tried to fix the picture, and I also fixed some errors and added a few lines in paragraph 1. I might have to find a new picture because this one is still a little too blurry.

vanslykej commented 7 years ago

The changes you made look good, but yeah would just keep working on the picture.

cookc3174 commented 7 years ago

I added a few things to my writing. I also need to add a few more lines. Could you read it over and give me ideas, like something I might have missed or briefly talked about. I need to make more changes but at the same time it has to make sense.

vanslykej commented 7 years ago

I like what you have written, and there is not much that I can recommend, however I would suggest maybe expanding slightly on what people should do instead or how to effectively and strategically use Google to maximize what they can gain from it.