In this writing piece there are several errors. Some are grammar, commas, and not being clear enough on what I am trying to write about. I can make the sentences that are not convincing by going more in depth of what I am talking about. I feel like when I wrote this paper I was too brief and not convincing enough to my readers.
In this writing piece there are several errors. Some are grammar, commas, and not being clear enough on what I am trying to write about. I can make the sentences that are not convincing by going more in depth of what I am talking about. I feel like when I wrote this paper I was too brief and not convincing enough to my readers.