Review of draft-ietf-core-conditional-attributes-07 [Section 6]

[bsilverajan]

From https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/core/mBfPbB892W95BnAHEq9wtv8aH9Y/

• The first paragraph can be rephrased as follows:

  This document establishes the "Conditional Attributes" registry within the "Constrained RESTful Environments (CoRE) Parameters" registry group, in order to ensure that attributes map uniquely to query parameter names.

• The text needs to provide the registration policy to use as per RFC

  8126. If the policy involves expert reviews, then additional text needs to provide guidelines for the experts (typically, as a separate subsection "Expert Review Instructions").

• The text should provide the actual definition of the intended registry fields "Attribute", "Parameter", "Value" (although you probably mean "Value Type"), and "Reference".

• The current Table 3 would better fit a new, separate section before the current Section 5 "Security Considerations". Then the current Section 6 can refer to that table as providing the initial content of the new registry.

[bsilverajan]

The first paragraph has been rephrased, and the remaining items are still TBD