Resource Directory (RD)
A web entity that stores information about web resources and
implements the REST interfaces defined in this specification for
discovery, for the creation, the maintenance and the removal of
registrations, and for lookup of the registered resources.
nit: the list structure is not parallel here. Maybe "for discovery,
creation, maintenance, and removal of registrations, and for lookup of
the registered resources"?
response:
The intended structure that's linearized into the sadly untreeish structure of
written language was
discovery
of registrations
creation
maintenance
removal
lookup
Ah! In that case, I'd suggest using semicolons for the "outer" list, and
commas for separating creation/maintenance/removal.
It'd sound like abuse of semicolons to me; keeping it open to ask RFC editor for their technical writing expertise.
From follow-up on Ben's initial DISCUSS:
It'd sound like abuse of semicolons to me; keeping it open to ask RFC editor for their technical writing expertise.