cosmos84
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6 years ago Thanks a lot for your precious and valuable feedback. I totally agree that one slide is not appropriate to present everything, I wish I had more room and time to present results more neatly! Next time! I hope can profit from other courses/projects to proceed further on data analysis! Thank you again, best regards
Summary Grade: Satisfactory
Good job overall! Your calculations and recommendations are valid, and you made sure to include relevant graphs and charts when appropriate.
My only tip would be that instead of cluttering one slide with all of your findings, it would be better to divide the presentation in different parts, such as one slide that goes over what the presentation hopes to achieve, one slide dedicated to describing the data that you worked with, another describing your calculations and recommendations. Whenever you're presenting findings in a real world scenario, you never want to just throw all of the information you found on one slide as this can be overwhelming to the person you're presenting to. Other than that, everything is good though!
Overall, you did a great job with your findings and your suggestions and recommendations are statistically valid. It's clear that you've been growing as a data scientist, so make sure to keep up the good work!