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Internet Lab #130

Closed lmock closed 10 years ago

lmock commented 10 years ago

Please leave your comments regarding the Internet Lab below. Thanks!

cycomachead commented 10 years ago

Here's some comments for the Internet Lab:

On the traceroute page It should explicitly explain how to type trace route in terminal.

The command needs to be /usr/sbin/traceroute

I think it's best if the command typing is initially separated from the output, or at least explain to students what they are supposed to do.

I think all commands should be monospaced. You can use <code> or <pre> in the HTML.

ibirnam commented 10 years ago

the first page should show them how to open a terminal on the Mac computers, or on their laptops (Mac and PC).

Other than that, I agree with Michael's comments.

jcawth commented 10 years ago

Michael is definitely correct on the command being /usr/sbin/traceroute, and the same for the ping command. I agree with the above statements and have found a few grammatical errors listed below.

on the Plain Text Connections page, the second sentence after the HTML Source heading, browser should be changed to the plural browsers.

Also, on the Connection Metrics page, when explaining the replacement with 225, i believe the sentence should be "Then replace the last digits of the IP (say XXX.YYY.ZZZ.001) address with 255" rather than the current, "The replace the last digit if the IP (say XXX.YYY.ZZZ.001) address with 255"

peterasujan commented 10 years ago

I'm actually not able to find "ping" at all, even in /usr/sbin/.

cycomachead commented 10 years ago

Ping is in /sbin/ping on these macs.

ibirnam commented 10 years ago

http://inst.eecs.berkeley.edu/~cs10/labs/cur/programming/internet/speed.html?topic=berkeley_bjc/areas/internet.topic&step=3&novideo=true&noreading=true&course=berkeley_bjc.html

Needs a definition for Throughput

empbetty commented 10 years ago

all above issues have been fixed