Change Introduction, lines 29-38 especially

csu-hmc / perturbed-data-paper

A paper on an elaborate gait data set.

https://peerj.com/articles/918/

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Change Introduction, lines 29-38 especially #93

Closed adkoele closed 9 years ago

adkoele commented 9 years ago

I found it a little jumpy

moorepants commented 9 years ago

The paragraph about the restrictions may not need the sentence about the Wilson data in it.

moorepants commented 9 years ago

I'm just closing this one. I read through again and it seems fine. I don't think the current ordering is detrimental. If you want to suggest a specific rewording I'll reconsider. Thanks.