The Deserts of the West: A travel guide to unknown lands

[mewo2]

In the grand tradition of fantasy novelists, I've got very bogged down in world-building, and particularly in generating maps. So I've decided that I'm going to make a guidebook of sorts, with maps of distant lands, and descriptions of the wonders that can be found there.

Some test maps:

[hugovk]

These look great!

[maetl]

:heart:

[mewo2]

I've been playing around with some text generation. It started out as an Invisible Cities pastiche, but it's gone in a slightly different direction.

Shurgulz

On entering the city, one may catch sight of the colossal castle of Barturk. From here, a traveller cannot discern how merchants crowd around its gate. Slightly closer to the heart of the city, the traveller will begin to hear songs of dirgeful ecstasy, sung by the bourgeoisie of the city. In the end the fragrance of ritig fruit fills the wind, and one has undeniably arrived.

In the Ancient Quarter, the alleyways are lined with lirbsha plants. Philosophers flock here, practising their skill at daplar. In the event that a traveller is so lucky as to stumble upon an argument between two lovers, it may be a humbling experience. The caged nanil birds will be obvious to one. These denote the home of an artisan. In the afternoon, the traveller can sometimes hear the song of the raski birds.

Kirrab

From Shurgulz a traveller may travel west to Kirrab. It is a pleasant journey. As the traveller enters Zhiturk, the greenery changes, giving way to open fields and thickets of lirbra flowers. At one point the route crosses a deep gorge. Near the roadside, mighty nirshuch graze.

Near to the monumental city of Kirrab, one will come across a nirpi, prized for its horns. Somewhat nearer to the centre of the city, the traveller will hear the song of the raski birds. At last the musk of biltarb trees fills the air, and one is beyond doubt in Kirrab.

In the Grey District, the boulevards are paved with lead, inlaid with obsidian. A traveller may usually hear the sound of the prison clock. The traveller will take note of the raltarb flowers. These are a warning to evil spirits.

Rutig

Leaving Kirrab a traveller can journey north to Rutig. It is an enjoyable journey. Along the way the track crosses a broad valley. When the traveller crosses into Dirchals, there is a variation in the light, and a harsh cast falls over the terrain. By the verge of the road, lirbra trees grow.

Entering famed Rutig, a traveller can encounter a series of pedlars, setting out their stalls. A little nearer to the inner parts of the city, a traveller will hear songs of plaintive joy, sung by citizens of Rutig. Eventually the bouquet of chalsri fruit fills the wind, and one is surely in Rutig.

Around the citadel, the squares are paved with granite, inlaid with limestone. Writers mill here, praying. Should the traveller be unfortunate enough to see artisans talking, one may be drawn in, and unable to leave. The caged nanil birds will be clear. These serve to warn off unwanted influences.

Gulztig

From Rutig one may travel to Gulztig. The route is well-trodden, and the journey takes but an afternoon. When a traveller crosses into Pibsir, the foliage changes, giving way to hedgerows and biltarb plants. On the track, raltarb plants grow. At one point the road crosses a deep gorge, spotted with shapi flowers.

Outside the tremendous city of Gulztig, the traveller will espy the sandstone lookout of the gargantuan fortress of Shurti. A little closer to the inner parts of the city, a traveller can faintly hear the striking of the theatre clock. Finally the smell of kira flowers fills the breeze, and one has truly arrived.

Near the dancing-hall of Rizhti, the back-streets are lined with lirbsha trees, and the blue petals sway in the air. A distracted visitor will miss the sandstone carvings which decorate the rooftops. These commemorate the pestilence which recently devastated a nearby village. The traveller may usually hear the delicate song of the raski birds. The idle rich teem here, laughing and dancing.

Tubil

Leaving Gulztig one can journey to Tubil. It is a smooth journey. As a traveller enters Chalszhi, there is a change in the light, and a grey cast falls over the land. Along the way the track crosses a broad valley. By the road, hairy ruzhsir graze.

At the outskirts of Tubil, one can espy the iniquitous mint of Zhubar. From so far, the traveller has no way to observe how actors steer clear of it. Closer to the centre of the city, the traveller begins to hear songs of sorrowful delight, sung by petty criminals of the surrounding countryside. Ultimately the perfume of ritig fruit fills the air, and a traveller has without a doubt arrived.

Close to the counting-house of Mizhbar, the streets are lined with raltarb trees, and the pleasant scent fills the late morning breeze. Farmers congregate here, talking. A traveller will see the zhatsal plants. These function as a caution to hostile influences.

Rushib

Leaving Tubil one can journey west to Rushib. The route is long, but rewarding, taking two days. On the verge of the road, shaggy ruzhsir graze. Along the way the track crosses a broad valley, spotted with lirbsha plants. When the traveller enters Mabzirsh, there is a shift in the light, and a pale cast falls over the landscape.

On entering the monumental city, the traveller may encounter goldsmiths, hawking their wares. Slightly nearer to the inner parts of the city, a traveller can faintly hear the clanging of the barbican clock. Ultimately the bouquet of kira flowers fills the breeze, and one is undoubtedly in Rushib.

In the New Quarter of the city, the roadways are paved with stone, inlaid with ivory. Soldiers throng here, singing and telling stories. An inattentive observer will overlook the obsidian statues that grace the eaves. These act as a relic of the war which long ago beset a nearby village.

[ikarth]

I love it! Though it is making me feel like I should hurry up if I want to try something clever with a travel journal.

[MichaelPaulukonis]

So, your map is displayed East to West, South to North?

Since traveling west from Shurgulz leads to Kirrab, and not the ocean.

Likewise, north of Kirrab lies Rutig, not the sleepy hamlet of Rubil.

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Otherwise, I am liking the look and sound of this.

[mewo2]

Yes, the map is displayed with south at the top, as is cartographic tradition in these lands.

[hugovk]

Yes, the map is displayed with south at the top, as is cartographic tradition in these lands.

Nice! How about a compass point on the map to make it more evident?

[mewo2]

I didn't want to make too big a deal about it, but I'll consider it.

[spc476]

Are you generating the maps randomly too? What are you using to draw them?

[erbridge]

I would love to see the source for these. They're really nice.

[mewo2]

I'm a little late with posting this, because I'm travelling right now. Code and final novel are now available.

Code: https://github.com/mewo2/deserts Final novel: https://github.com/mewo2/deserts/raw/master/novel.pdf

[hugovk]

It's good!

I'm a little late with posting this, because I'm travelling right now.

Apt!

[mewo2]

Now available in Twitter bot form! https://twitter.com/unchartedatlas

[hugovk]

:+1: Bot all the books!

[mewo2]

I wrote an explanation of the placename generator: http://mewo2.com/notes/naming-language/

And an explanation of the map generator: http://mewo2.com/notes/terrain/