dataviz-sp22 / proj2-superb-bilby

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Peer review #2

Closed priemB closed 2 years ago

priemB commented 2 years ago

The goal of this project is to create a website that provides easy interpretability of the true scale of global wealth and income inequality.

  1. The Forbes Billionaire's List. This data provides the team with details about billionaires, including a wealth variable and location (specific state if billionaire is from the US).
  2. Wealth Mobility Dataset. This data breaks down wealth by quintiles and has a binary race category (Black or white). The geographic location is unknown, as is the year of wealth estimates.

The team will create animations and interactive dashboards to visualize 1) how wealthy each billionaire is compare to others (unclear who the others are just yet), 2) the industries of the billionaires in bar plots, 3) state-level distributions of where billionaires were born in the US (via a chloropleth), and 4) economic mobility patterns with a drop-down interactive element.

  1. Is the Wealth Mobility Dataset from the US only? What year is the data from? Since these are relative to each other (put into quintiles) you might want to really clarify in your visualizations that these are measures of wealth mobility in X location ONLY (not global, unless in fact it really is a global relative estimate of mobility).
  2. The Forbes dataset is listed as annual, so I assume it is from 2021. You might want to clarify this. Knowing the years of the wealth measures will help the reader understand how comparable these measures of wealth are.
  3. In your visualization plan, you mention you are comparing wealth inequality to the average-income person based on GDP produced per capita. Is this a separate dataset you are incorporating or where are these values coming from? Also, from a theoretical standpoint, income and wealth are actually two separate measures and it's difficult to compare the two in a meaningful way.

The interactive pieces are really excellent and achieve your goals of understanding the scale of wealth inequality. What could be improved is the way you connect your visualizations to your original questions. For example, the question "Does anybody really need so much wealth?" cannot be answered with your data and in visual format. It's also unclear with the "What can the wealth of a billionaire accomplish?" question how a visualization would answer this. One idea might be to find a measure of debt or cost of social welfare program and how many households it sustains and create a visualization of that. E.g., Bezos could take 1% of his wealth and pay for the entire budget of SNAP benefits, or something like that.

It's a bit unclear what the interactive dashboard for economic mobility will convey. Maybe if you link that more clearly to a research question or some type of framing it will be easier for the reader to take away your key point from choosing different quintiles for mobility.

The most promising elements are the comparative elements to offer scale (e.g., how many households - visualized with a grain of rice - it would take to reach each billionaire's wealth profile). Finding a way to map this information onto existing schemas (we all understand the scale of a grain of rice) and do this in a clear visualization will be a great challenge and accomplishment!

The Repo organization seems like it might not yet be finished. Will there also be a folder for the presentation - or will the presentation be a walk-through of the website you create from your analysis?