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Mortality estimate page #18

Closed davidkane9 closed 3 years ago

s-patkar commented 3 years ago

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s-patkar commented 3 years ago

Fixed Refer to #22

s-patkar commented 3 years ago

rename title to "estimating mortality" "direct" should be in single quotes rephrase to "rappaport" says that...." quote all Rappaport sentences QUOTE THEM ALL\ rephrase "the official death toll for maria was 64" full citation for "64" -> give footnote remove paragraph titles footnotes for all timeline objects remove first 3 timeline sections remove times remove all headers, make normal text add colons

include: sept 20, oct 2017, may 2018: split into 2 sentences, give CI

reword may-june 2018 to "kishore et al receives widespread news coverage" make all headlines footnotes

reword news article paragraph "all these articles reported 64 and 4xxx without noting that the two numbers are based of different definitions. the official def is based of direct deaths. kishore is based of excess mortality. "

remove official publishing date

rename "George Washington ... reports excess mortality of 2975"

ADD: kane 2018 notes the flawed mortality date underlined in kishore 2018.