Closed davidkane9 closed 3 years ago
Fixed Refer to #22
rename title to "estimating mortality" "direct" should be in single quotes rephrase to "rappaport" says that...." quote all Rappaport sentences QUOTE THEM ALL\ rephrase "the official death toll for maria was 64" full citation for "64" -> give footnote remove paragraph titles footnotes for all timeline objects remove first 3 timeline sections remove times remove all headers, make normal text add colons
include: sept 20, oct 2017, may 2018: split into 2 sentences, give CI
reword may-june 2018 to "kishore et al receives widespread news coverage" make all headlines footnotes
reword news article paragraph "all these articles reported 64 and 4xxx without noting that the two numbers are based of different definitions. the official def is based of direct deaths. kishore is based of excess mortality. "
remove official publishing date
rename "George Washington ... reports excess mortality of 2975"
ADD: kane 2018 notes the flawed mortality date underlined in kishore 2018.
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