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Applying Privacy-Enhancing Technologies: One Alternative Future of Protesting
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Edit abstract #14

Closed dbosk closed 7 years ago

dbosk commented 7 years ago

From reviews: the abstract is too direct. better to rewrite in a more fluid way. make it clear to the reader that you mean "used by demonstrators”, and not “used by public authorities to monitor protests". Edited a month ago