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Master copy of P2PSIP Base draft
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Gen-ART 9 #146

Closed deanwillis closed 11 years ago

deanwillis commented 11 years ago

From: Mary Barnes

Description: - Section 5.1.1 [6.1.1]: Bullet items need normative language -- 1st bullet: It's also not clear what the its are in "it passes it up". I think it should be "the node passes the message up to the upper layers". However, this probably needs to be normative language - i.e., "the node MUST pass the message to the upper layers". The same applies to the third bullet.

Notes: Will fix text.