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Gen-ART 12 #148

Closed deanwillis closed 11 years ago

deanwillis commented 11 years ago

From: Mary Barnes

Description: - Section 5.1.2 [6.1.2] -- Last paragraph (9) mixes normative text with in an example. The normative text needs to be separated from the example - e.g., split some of the sentences into the normative behavior and then the example. 

Notes: Will separate example from normative text

petithug commented 11 years ago

Note that paragraph 5 has the same issue, so I'll fix both at the same time.

petithug commented 11 years ago

Well, the text I proposed is as convoluted than the original text, but without the examples (that probably made it less convoluted). Your text is better, obviously.

As for the "provided by", it was also there, so I kept it. But reading it again, it does not make sense - this works whatever the upstream node does, as long as it implements the spec.

petithug commented 11 years ago

Comment from Cullen: I think I would prefer to keep the explicit example given how much confusion there has been on this but don't feel super strong one way or other about this.