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Gen-ART 33 #164

Closed deanwillis closed 11 years ago

deanwillis commented 11 years ago

From: Mary Barnes

Description: Section 9.5 [10.5]: While this section does have a fair amount of normative language, it is still lacking in a few cases: -Item 2.: "should" -> "SHOULD" -Item 5.: "The AP sends the response…" -> "The AP MUST send the response…" -1st paragraph after list: "…can directly connect…" -> "MAY directly connect" -2nd paragraph after list: "it can still populate" -> "it MAY still populate" -2nd paragraph after list: the description of the use of PING should be reworded with normative language (I'll leave that exercise to the authors) -3rd paragraph after the list: "JP simply sends" -> "JP MUST send"

Notes: Will fix text as suggested.

petithug commented 11 years ago

Comment from Cullen: I'm fine with this but it's weird to have MAY on one line then on next line say that MAY is RECOMMENDED

petithug commented 11 years ago

Comment from Cullen: lets remote the MAY on line 6245 - it does do this and it's not MUST , it's just what happens