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Master copy of P2PSIP Base draft
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Gen-ART 83 #202

Closed deanwillis closed 11 years ago

deanwillis commented 11 years ago

From: Mary Barnes

Description: I also strongly recommend that you ensure Henning has reviewed this document before it gets into the RFC editor's queue. He has fairly strict (and quite accurate) views on grammar and structure but it really isn't good to have so many changes go in at AUTH48 as there is a risk of introducing true technical bugs or changing something that was carefully crafted to achieve WG consensus: http://www.cs.columbia.edu/~hgs/etc/writing-bugs.html

Notes: Will do a pass on the whole document with those advices in mind.

petithug commented 11 years ago

I will do this as part of my complete review, after all the IESG and Gen-ART edits are committed in Cullen's repo.