Description: [-17] Section 3.1, 1st para: This sentence doesn't grok because the concept of "overlay parameters" hasn't been mentioned before this section nor has the concept of a "configuration document".
"The overlay parameters are specified in a configuration document."
At a minimum those terms should be defined in the terminology section and introduced in the intro paragraph in section 3.
From: Mary Barnes
Description: [-17] Section 3.1, 1st para: This sentence doesn't grok because the concept of "overlay parameters" hasn't been mentioned before this section nor has the concept of a "configuration document". "The overlay parameters are specified in a configuration document." At a minimum those terms should be defined in the terminology section and introduced in the intro paragraph in section 3.
Notes: Will fix the text