deniseyu / crochet-programming

notes for a new talk
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I have feedback, I guess! #2

Open Torvaney opened 3 years ago

Torvaney commented 3 years ago

Would you add or cut anything?

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Did anything jump out to you as jargon-filled, tenuous, or unnecessary?

Nope!

What would you expect to get out of a talk with this title and abstract? Did you feel like this outline delivered on that?

My goal is to show people that the principles of computer programming have existed for a long time in the realm of the fibre arts

and get people thinking about other unlikely places where "computer programs" can exist!

I'm not sure I got this from the text alone. I think because the talk is so focused on fibre arts, it didn't really occur to me to take a step back and think about the similarities in a slightly more abstract way (until reviewing the abstract). So, I would suggest that someone like me maybe needs a little more hand-holding to read between the lines better (might just be me!).

Although, I can see how this might become more apparent when the section on history is filled out. I guess the emergence of computer programming and textile programming were responses to similar problems in their respective domains?

Any other thoughts?

Good luck with the talk(s)!

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