peggygannon
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3 years ago Hi, @mmiddaugh Please see Platform content feedback below.
Most of the feedback I put under Should are examples of VA.gov style guidance that the content editors should take into account when uploading their local content. Hope this is helpful.
Let me know if you have any questions or need me to clarify anything.
Question Can we also provide a TTY contact number for the Vet Center main location and its satellite locations?
Must feedback
- Please fix incorrect breadcrumb
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Please cap the first word in the bullet points under “What to bring” accordion
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Under "suicide prevention" accordion, can we also include the other ways that users can get in touch with VCL -Text -Confidential chat -TTY number
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Under Privacy accordion Please Fix misspelling of Judgement > judgment
Should feedback
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Use of “non-traditional”> I recommend we use another, more PL and user friendly term.. Could we use “off hours” or “outside of normal business hours” instead?
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Some style guidance to share with editors uploading the Vet Center content:
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Sentence case all labels, headers. For example: Main Location > Main location
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Post traumatic stress disorder > should be posttraumatic stress disorder
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Community based > community-based For example: Vet Centers are community-based
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Don't use vanity phone numbers. (in yellow alert), as it adds visual noise for screen reader users.
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well lit> well-lit parking lot
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Please use contractions throughout Do not > don’t and Are not> aren’t
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Under "Couple and family counseling" accordion Add comma before such as> , such as
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Significant Other> is there a reason these words are capitalized? If not, then please lowercase> significant other
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Under "Intimate partner" accordion Please cap Domestic under this header > Domestic violence
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Under "Mental health care" accordion Evidence based> evidenced-based therapies
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Under PTSD accordion Lowercase Center in this sentence> Specialty care at our Center includes:
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evidence based > evidence-based
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Cap a in And more bullet
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VA vidoeconnect > VA video connect
Under "Veteran connection" accordion
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Add a colon after this line: Escanaba Vet Center can help know where to go and how to register for:
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The bullets under this line aren’t parallel with the line above it. Please rewrite the bullet points for parallel construction and sense. For example, the sentence that sets up the bullets ends with: …how to register for: And the first bullet point is: How to get VA medical benefits and register for care,
Under "Who is eligible to receive services at Vet Centers?"
- Please move period out of this parenthetical (regardless of gender or service area). It should appear outside of the parenthesis
- (regardless of location.)> should be (regardless of location). The period should appear outside of parenthesis
Under "Do I have to be enrolled in VA health care?" accordion
- VA Healthcare > VA health care
- Service connected disability> service-connected disability
Under "Privacy" accordion
- This is the only accordion that has a bold lede-in. No other accordion has this formatting. I recommend rewriting “Safe and confidential” into a sentence, or removing the bolded text.
The [Get directions] links should be more descriptive to better inform users with accessibility issues
Consider feedback
The content in the yellow alert is related to the content immediately above it.
Consider taking the content out of the yellow alert and combining this content. Here’s a recommendation to consider:
We’re also available after hours, based on the community’s need. Please call us at [phone number] to find out more. If you need to talk to someone after hours or on a weekend or holiday, the Vet Center call center is available 24/7 at [877-927-8387]hyperlink.
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