Vet Centers: Copyedits before sending for final approval

[RLHecht]

Issue Description

This ticket is to track the final copyedits of Vet Centers before we send them to Tiffany and Jessica for their review.

Michelle and Randi will add to the list as pages are ready for Megan.

District 2

• [x] Myrtle Beach (requested 9/7)
• [x] St. Petersburg (email 9/12: Tiffany's asking for a copyedit review before Jessica reviews it. She asked that you email her with any feedback or edits so she can address them with Jessica and the VCD)
• [x] Jupiter Vet Center (9/22)
• [x] Pensacola
• [x] Daytona Beach
• [x] Knoxville
• [x] Greenville
• [x] Tallahassee

District 3

• [x] South Bend, IN
• [x] Evansville Vet Center (requested 9/14)
• [x] Cleveland Vet Center (requested 9/15) (fyi the broken link has been reported to the Support team - it's a valid url)
• [x] Minot

District 4

Acceptance Criteria

• [ ] All pages have been copyedited and sent for final review

[megzehn]

Updated 9/29. Removed pages that have been published (Jupiter, South Bend, St. Petersburg, Chicago, Gainesville, and Sioux Falls)

Update 9/22: I reviewed all of the VCs in this ticket, plus some others that came through the copyediting phase. Here are where they stand:

Edited and sent back for corrections/confirmation:

• Evansville (requested additional updates 9/21 -- to clarify some things and tweak Veteran connection, community engagement, and grief and bereavement)
• Cleveland (requested some clarifications and minor tweaks on 9/21 -- discussed this one with Jessica)
• Rapid City (requested additional edits on 9/21 -- needs CAP image, Veteran connections, Addiction and substance use, Returning service care)
• Bay County (needs to add CAP photos and confirm art therapy Q. emailed on 9/21)

Edited and sent to Tiffany for final sign off:

• Myrtle Beach
• Memphis
• Pensacola

Ready for publishing, except holding for a CAP issue

• Ocala
• Marietta

[mmiddaugh]

@megzehn Pensacola Vet Center is ready for a copy-editing pass before moving into the final review process. Thank you!

[mmiddaugh]

Daytona Beach and Greenville, SC are both ready for your copy-editing pass, @megzehn

[mmiddaugh]

Knoxville is also ready for copy-editing @megzehn

[mmiddaugh]

@megzehn Madison Vet Center is ready for copy editing. I've reported their broken link to the support team, fyi.

[mmiddaugh]

@megzehn Lawrenceville Vet Center is ready for copy editing

[mmiddaugh]

@megzehn Fort Lauderdale is ready for copy-editing

[megzehn]

10/6 update:

Copy edited and published: Lawrenceville, Madison, Greenville, and Pensacola

Copy edited and with Tiffany: Daytona Beach

Back with VC for more edit requests: Fort Lauderdale

To be copy edited: Minot

[mmiddaugh]

@megzehn

• Will you take a peek at Johnson City? They need only a second spotlight so perhaps you could give any other feedback with a gentle reminder on that? (last email was 9/22)
• Likewise, Pompano Beach is spare but ready, aside from a requested revision in Community engagement (last email 9/26)

[megzehn]

Hi @RLHecht and @mmiddaugh! Sending a few updates over before I take off for the next week:

Ready to be published

• Cleveland

Reviewed

• Johnson City (with Tiffany)
• Wichita (with Tiffany)
• Minot (reviewed and sent a few pieces of feedback back to the VC)
• Fort Lauderdale (reviewed and sent a few pieces of feedback back to the VC)

To be copyedited

• Pampano Beach -- I didn't get a chance to finish this one, but I noticed they didn't have any CAPs listed, and their posted hours went to 8 p.m. several nights. Could you confirm both of those things are accurate, Michelle?

I’m happy to either finish looking at their page when I return or pass it over to you Randi, if you have some time.

Thank you both so much for all of your help!!

[mmiddaugh]

@megzehn Tallahassee is ready for you - it's spare but clean.

[mmiddaugh]

@megzehn To be copy edited, please

• [x] Des Moines Vet Center

[mmiddaugh]

@megzehn To be copy edited, please

• [x] San Juan Vet Center
• [x] Columbus, OH Vet Center

[megzehn]

• [ ] Saginaw VC (requested an additional review 11/7, MZ will take)

[RLHecht]

From Tiffany:

• [x] Melbourne Vet Center

[mmiddaugh]

@megzehn Macomb County is ready for a copy-editing pass.

[mmiddaugh]

@megzehn Pontiac is also ready for copy-editing (same editor as Macomb County, fyi) please include Kristina Krozal (new director) on feedback

[mmiddaugh]

@megzehn Chicago Heights is also ready for you

[megzehn]

Thank you! Confirming that these are all copy edited and submitted for final review, and the Knowledge Base article is updated.

• [x] Chicago Heights
• [x] Macomb County
• [x] Pontiac
• [x] Pasco County
• [x] Melbourne

I also sent additional feedback to St. Paul on 11/22.

[mmiddaugh]

@megzehn

• [x] Evanston Vet Center is ready for copy-editing ~but I let him know that he needs to replace the outdated Veterans Day Brunch spotlight before he can be published.~(update: spotlight has been replaced)

[mmiddaugh]

@megzehn

• [x] Stark County is ready for copy-editing 2 CAP photos and confirmation of hours are pending

[mmiddaugh]

@megzehn

• [x] Lincoln Vet Center is ready for copy-editing with one CAP photo pending

[mmiddaugh]

@megzehn

• [x] Fort Wayne Vet Center is ready for copy-editing

[mmiddaugh]

@megzehn

• [x] Clearwater Vet Center is ready for copy-editing. (Hours are correct and they do not have CAPs)

[mmiddaugh]

@megzehn

• [x] Traverse City is ready for your copy-editing. (No CAPs)

[mmiddaugh]

@megzehn

• [x] Sioux City Vet Center is ready for your copy-editing, pending CAP confirmation

[mmiddaugh]

• [x] Grand Rapids Vet Center is ready for copy-editing, per Tiffany No CAPs or access to Mobile Vet Center

[mmiddaugh]

• [x] Quad Cities is ready for copy-editing. No CAPs The team is looking into the reason Suicide prevention is duplicated as a service on the page, fyi

[mmiddaugh]

@megzehn

• [x] Bismarck Vet Center is ready for copy-editing They have some staff vacancies - they only have one group and no evidence based methods to mention until new staff join.

[mmiddaugh]

Per Tiffany's email 12/6, the following are ready for copy-editing

• [x] Anoka
• [x] Orland Park

[mmiddaugh]

• [x] Aurora Vet Center is ready for copywriting. No CAPs or public transportation to include @megzehn

[mmiddaugh]

@megzehn

• [x] Cedar Rapids Vet Center is ready for copywriting

[mmiddaugh]

@megzehn

• [x] Palm Beach Vet Center is ready for copy-editing. They do not have CAPs or an MVC to add

[mmiddaugh]

@megzehn

• [x] La Crosse Vet Center is ready for copy-editing.

[mmiddaugh]

@megzehn

• [x] Mobile Vet Center is ready for copy-editing. CAP images are pending.

[mmiddaugh]

@megzehn

• [x] Rockford Vet Center is ready for copy-editing (two small edits requested 12/12 by email)

[mmiddaugh]

@megzehn

• [x] Okaloosa County Vet Center is ready for you. The CAPs don't follow the naming convention but are very specialized and may need to be handled differently, FYI

[mmiddaugh]

@megzehn

• [x] Gary Area Vet Center is ready for your copyediting

[mmiddaugh]

@megzehn

• [x] Green Bay is ready for copy-editing per Tiffany on 12/12 The Keshena CAP should be removed and any questions about the content should be directed to Tiffany.

[mmiddaugh]

@megzehn

• [x] Duluth Vet Center is ready for copy-editing. He will request an update to the hours of operation.

[RLHecht]

Closing as we're tracking the last 2 Vet Centers elsewhere.