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[COPY-EDIT] Review content of "COATESVILLE, PA - ABOUT" for plain language and insertion into CMS/VA facility web page [COPY-EDITOR] #5045

Open SgardnerPMP opened 4 years ago

SgardnerPMP commented 4 years ago

User Story or Problem Statement

As a Veteran Web user, I need a need a plain language description of services in the "Work With US", web page for Butler VA Health Care System website so I can quickly understand the services and service location for my needs.

Goal

Efficient and clear content describing local Work With US Page?

Objectives or Key Results this is meant to further

Copy Locations

Where copy is stored and where it will be placed for review Content Tracker VAMC Share Drive VAMC SharePoint Documents Document location

Resources - Tools - Documentation

Required VAMC WebPage Listing and Drupal Example Legacy Coatesville,, PA About Page

Tasks

The steps that must be complete before hand off to PAO/Product Lead review

Acceptance Criteria

The steps that must be complete before hand off to PAO/Product Lead review

LouCarlozo63 commented 4 years ago

Randi: There is, I believe, a lot of excess copy here that I'm recommending we omit. It strays off the mission of giving Vets plain language and an easy path to the resources they need. Best, Lou