[Design, FE] 10-10EZ - Household section: Content updates from pre-staging review

hdjustice commented 1 year ago

Background

Per the latest content review in ticket #52920, the following updates need to be implemented:

FINANCIAL INFO YOU WILL NEED PAGE Sketch MUST Remove references of "your" and add in "annual".

SPOUSE ADDITIONAL INFORMATION PAGE https://staging.va.gov/health-care/apply/application/household-information-v2/spouse-additional-information https://www.sketch.com/s/da85cf44-4503-4e98-834e-ff068b242ef6/a/Eeeqyyd

SHOULD Adjustment to second question to state "Do you currently have the same address as your spouse?"

SPOUSE FINANCIAL SUPPORT PAGE https://staging.va.gov/health-care/apply/application/household-information-v2/spouse-financial-support https://www.sketch.com/s/da85cf44-4503-4e98-834e-ff068b242ef6/a/ZVVJGwZ

SHOULD

Add 'additional info component'

ADD/REVIEW DEPENDENT PAGES https://staging.va.gov/health-care/apply/application/household-information-v2/dependents https://www.sketch.com/s/da85cf44-4503-4e98-834e-ff068b242ef6/a/AZxwR8r?annotation=4fa3c0d4-fe3a-4a06-bc58-9c914708a1c8

Changes to additional info component content - NOTE this is also used on the Review Dependents page and same updates need to be made there

MUST - correcting a potential typo and also adding the school types, because they're on the form They're between the ages of 18 and 23 years old and were enrolled as a full-time or part-time student in high school, college, or vocational school in 2022
MUST - VA site style/style standards uses "years old" after age.

CANCEL ADDING THIS DEPENDENT MODAL https://staging.va.gov/health-care/apply/application/household-information-v2/dependent-information?index=0 https://www.sketch.com/s/da85cf44-4503-4e98-834e-ff068b242ef6/a/bLLq59z

MUST - adjust the content re: the screen that they'll go back to if they cancel adding. Content on this screen needs to match the action if they go back/cancel.
SHOULD - modal title change - if this can happen after staging, that would be great. This is a pattern being used in secure messaging/health tools work as well).

DEPENDENT EDUCATION EXPENSES INFORMATION PAGE Sketch

SHOULD: full-time or part-time student in 2022?

DEPENDENT ADDITIONAL INFORMATION PAGE https://staging.va.gov/health-care/apply/application/household-information-v2/dependent-information?index=0 https://www.sketch.com/s/da85cf44-4503-4e98-834e-ff068b242ef6/a/nQQldKk

MUST
- Change first question to this (aligning with the dependent additional info component): Is your dependent living with a permanent disability that happened before they turned 18 years old?

DEPENDENT'S SUPPORT PAGE

SHOULD - Adjustments to additional info label and content (add dependent content to title and remove spousal support from content)

DEPENDENT'S INCOME https://staging.va.gov/health-care/apply/application/household-information-v2/dependent-information?index=0 https://www.sketch.com/s/da85cf44-4503-4e98-834e-ff068b242ef6/a/WddpxZ0

MUST/SHOULD - getting rid of some of the repetition here. If changes can happen post staging, adjust content then
- Changes to the field titles – removing the dependent each time
MUST/SHOULD - removed instances of "your" because these screens are for the Veteran and then dependent/spouse information. We should be consistent across the screens
- Adjustments to the additional info components

REMOVE THIS DEPENDENT MODAL https://www.sketch.com/s/da85cf44-4503-4e98-834e-ff068b242ef6/a/dggqLRZ

SHOULD - this can happen post staging
- Following new content pattern, leading this a question for this confirmation modal

INCOME PAGES - VETERAN AND SPOUSE https://staging.va.gov/health-care/apply/application/household-information-v2/veteran-annual-income https://staging.va.gov/health-care/apply/application/household-information-v2/spouse-annual-income https://www.sketch.com/s/da85cf44-4503-4e98-834e-ff068b242ef6/a/3oKK9zd?annotation=c767b014-309a-4c87-b07e-f41260cf7e0b https://www.sketch.com/s/da85cf44-4503-4e98-834e-ff068b242ef6/a/r9qq3VK

MUST/SHOULD - similar to dependent income screen, Remove instances of "your" in field notes/text, remove spouse/your from field titles, make sure field labels is where "your spouse' is used.

VETERAN INCOME:

SPOUSE INCOME:

Change to page header, remove Your
Spouse's annual income from 2022

DEDUCTIBLES https://staging.va.gov/health-care/apply/application/household-information-v2/deductible-expenses https://www.sketch.com/s/da85cf44-4503-4e98-834e-ff068b242ef6/a/JA88E27

MUST/SHOULD - Typo on 'change' to 'changes' in medical expenses additional info component. Additional sentence added after bulleted list.

Tasks

[x] Design - update designs per feedback above
[x] Design - Inform Engineer this ticket is ready to pick up and complete
[x] Engineer - implement design updates
[x] Engineer - validate with PM on changes
[x] PM - validate and close ticket

Acceptance Criteria

Content review designs are updated and code changes are implemented, as described

aliyahblackmore commented 1 year ago

Hi @hdjustice and @jessicastump just tracking that were some adjustments to feedback during our call earlier - they're tracked in the Sketch QA comments!

Summary here:

The footer, confirmation screen, and drop down list content/questions will be addressed in a future ticket/work. We documented this on the corresponding sketch screens. And there are tickets that'll be opened for these things.
All of the other content adjustments on the sketch screens will be added/changes and then engineers will get those through to staging, in time for the staging review artifact deadline.

hdjustice commented 1 year ago

Got it, thanks @aliyahblackmore !

jessicastump commented 1 year ago

Hi! - @aliyahblackmore Please make sure that the Sketch QA page (MOBILE only for now - I will work on Desktop screens next) should have all MUST/SHOULD content changes made and accounted for. Everything is also in this ticket description and I added screen captures.

@hdjustice and @longmd - Pending Aliyah's confirmation, all content changes are in this ticket/Sketch QA page.

aliyahblackmore commented 1 year ago

Hi @jessicastump! I'll take a look at these later this evening. I'll comment in this ticket if there are any missing changes.

Thank you!

aliyahblackmore commented 1 year ago

Hi @jessicastump! I did a review of all of the screens with your edits to the must/should changes above/in the sketch comments. They look great.

Sharing two last changes below, once their made - this has my confirmation that everything is accounted for!

Thanks again for your continued collaboration on this work!

TWO LAST CHANGES pre-staging:

ONE - On the DEPENDENT'S SUPPORT PAGE, since this screen is only being shown if the Veteran has a dependent who is an unmarried child (we clarified in our conversation earlier this afternoon) then we should adjust the additional information header slightly to be this:

What we consider financial support for a dependent child

If my understanding here is not accurate re: the flow, there is still one small change to the component header - to put "dependent" after:

_What we consider financial support for a dependent_

This edit more closely aligns with the additional info component on the spouse financial support screen.

I tracked this on the sketch screen.

TWO - On the DEPENDENT'S EDUCATIONAL EXPENSES PAGE, change "educational expenses" to "education expenses" I tracked this on the sketch screen

jessicastump commented 1 year ago

@longmd - This ticket is ready with the final content must edits. I am working on updating the desktop screens in the Sketch file this am, but the mobile screens and this ticket has everything.

longmd commented 1 year ago

@jessicastump , are these only musts? If there are shoulds that we could knock out that are small, we can go ahead with those, too.

jessicastump commented 1 year ago

@longmd - Must and shoulds are both included here. The coulds will all be new tickets.

longmd commented 1 year ago

@jessicastump , on the cancel modal... do we need to adjust the description for cancelling an edit action to match that of the add action? Currently for edit it says This will stop editing {dependentName}. You will return to a list of any previously added dependents and your edits will not be applied.

longmd commented 1 year ago

@jessicastump , there is also still one spot where we reference "last year" instead of the actual year number in the dependent section. If your dependent didn't live with you last year, did you provide financial support?. Does that need to be changed to the year number, too, to be consistent with the entire rest of the section?

jessicastump commented 1 year ago

@longmd - For the cancel modal, yes there is new description text reading:

If you cancel adding this dependent, we won’t save their information. You’ll return to a screen where you can add or remove dependents.

@aliyahblackmore Can you please confirm if we should leave this question as is or change last year to in 2022:

If your dependent didn't live with you last year, did you provide financial support?

longmd commented 1 year ago

@jessicastump , we have a different description for canceling adding a new dependent and editing an existing dependent. My question is, do we need to change the description when you attempt to cancel editing--listed in my comment above--to more closely match that of the new description for canceling adding?

jessicastump commented 1 year ago

Thank you for calling this out! Direct sketch links below. Both should have the headline be a question and copy description is in the Sketch links:

Sketch file for Cancel EDIT modal Sketch file for Cancel ADD modal

aliyahblackmore commented 1 year ago

@aliyahblackmore Can you please confirm if we should leave this question as is or change last year to in 2022:

If your dependent didn't live with you last year, did you provide financial support?

Yes, change "last year" to "in 2022" cc: @jessicastump @longmd

longmd commented 1 year ago

@hdjustice / @jessicastump , these have been completed and are ready for your final review and signoff.

jessicastump commented 1 year ago

@longmd I went through staging a couple of times and I believe all content changes are accounted for!

hdjustice commented 1 year ago

I am good with this. Thank you both so much for the quick turnaround!

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