Copyedit for 2023 audit: VA Individual Unemployability if you can’t work

[bethpottsVADEPO]

For the annual audit of all the pages in the disability hub, OCTO content lead assessed these content issues on the VA Individual Unemployability if you can’t work page and made changes that need copyediting before we republish the page:

• The intro paragraph has no more than 2 to 4 sentences, is within 200 to 400 characters with spaces, and follows our pattern and style for intros (short sentences, paragraph ends with a CTA, etc.). Rewrote this.
• Removed "Who's covered?" section
• Add this Note to the end of the blue box: Note: If you get a disability rating, you may also be eligible for VA health care and other benefits.
• Deleted "What kind of disability benefits can I get?" section
• Change the H2 from "How do I get these benefits" to "How do I file a claim for compensation?" / add an action link for the CTA and use the label "File for disability compensation online" / Use this text for the link under the action link that should point to the How to file page: "Learn about other ways to file a disability compensation claim"
• Create a new Q&A to house the example until we figure out if we want to keep examples for the pages in this section.
• Edits and reorganization to clarify that you need to file a claim (526) as well as submitting 2 additional forms.
• Relevant terms from page are in content brief and any relevant backlog work is noted

Copyeditor will check these in addition to copyediting the above-mentioned edits:

• Header levels are hierarchical
• The page has no broken links
• Text links have purpose and target
• The content is free of ability-focused language (view, walk, see, hear) Note: We allow "show" and "appear" when talking about evidence related to disability compensation.
• Flesch-Kincaid before and after grade level

No callouts for the stakeholder.

Tasks

• [x] Copy edit the changes made
• [x] Check all links
• [x] Request review from SME
• [x] Incorporate SME changes in Drupal
• [x] Add notes from the SME to the record of audit for this page
• [x] Publish page

[megzehn]

We've recorded this in the Github audit, so we're good to close this!