Copyedit for 2023 audit: Disability landing page

[megzehn]

Issue Description

For the rolling audit of all the pages in the disability hub, OCTO content lead assessed these content issues on the Standard disability claims page and made changes that need copyediting before we republish the page:

• The intro paragraph has no more than 2 to 4 sentences, is within 200 to 400 characters with spaces, and follows our pattern and style for intros (short sentences, paragraph ends with a CTA, etc.).
• Relevant terms from page are in content brief and any relevant backlog work is noted.

Copyeditor will check these in addition to copyediting the above-mentioned edits:

• Header levels are hierarchical
• The page has no broken links
• Text links have purpose and target
• The content is free of ability-focused language (view, walk, see, hear) Note: We allow "show" and "appear" when talking about evidence related to disability compensation. Note: We link and mention 2 pages with "View" in the H1. We left those on the page for now, but removed "view" from the teaser content.
• Flesch-Kincaid before and after grade level

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Tasks

• [x] Copyedit the OCTO changes made (review revisions only, not the full page) to https://www.va.gov/disability/
• [x] Check each item in the 5 bullets above.
• [x] Request review from Matt Eakman, SME
• [x] Incorporate his changes in Drupal
• [x] Add Flesch-Kincaid before and after grade level to Github
• [x] Add notes from him to the record of audit for this page
• [x] Publish page

Acceptance Criteria

• [ ] Updates are live on the site

[megzehn]

Update: We sent this over to Matt and published the PL changes. The next steps are to make sure that all this is recorded in our github audit files.

[megzehn]

The information is recorded in the github audit files. We can close this.