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[CAIA intake] 527EZ ITF alert copy #78928

Open gmaciolek opened 5 months ago

gmaciolek commented 5 months ago

Content, accessibility, information architecture (CAIA) new initiative collaboration request

Use this ticket to start collaboration on a new initiative with the sitewide content, accessibility, and information architecture (CAIA) team.

Note: If you’re already partnering with us on an initiative, you don't need to fill out this request form. If you don’t have access to your initiative’s CAIA epic, post a message in the #sitewide-content-accessibility-ia slack channel and tag @Terry Nichols and @Lily Strelich.

About your team

About your initiative

Which of these descriptions best fits the work we’ll partner on?

Select all that apply.

What's the nature of your initiative and desired outcomes?

We're incorporating establishing an ITF into the Pension form flow and have drafted alert copy for various ITF scenarios. We've modeled our solution after the 526 form implementation of ITF, but we're proposing tweaks to the alert copy based on recent research with Veterans related to ITF.

Collaboration timeframe

Note: We work on nearly every OCTO product and manage all unauthenticated content on VA.gov, so we will need to prioritize intake requests based on overall workload and VA and OCTO priorities.

Is this work tied to a Congressional mandate, change in law or policy, or upcoming event with a specific deadline?

Where are you at in your timeline?

Tell us briefly about what you're working on now (such as initial discovery, wireframing, or usability research planning) and add any known dates for upcoming milestones or deadlines.

We've drafted copy for various ITF alert scenarios. We don't have any hard deadlines, but our progress on this is blocked until we have finalized, approved copy.

Collaboration cycle

Which phases of the collaboration cycle have you completed?

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Collaboration cycle ticket

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Supporting artifacts

Provide links to any supporting artifacts that can help us better understand your initiative and begin collaboration. Include artifacts like your product outline, user flows, mockups and prototypes, or any draft content.

Next steps

Tasks


### VFS team tasks
- [ ] **If you also need engineering support from the public websites team**, fill out their intake request form as well.<br> [Open a public websites intake request](https://github.com/department-of-veterans-affairs/va.gov-team/issues/new?assignees=Public+Websites%2C+Sitewide+content&labels=vsa-public-websites%2C+vsa%2C+vsa-public-websites-intake%2C+sitewide-content%2C+needs-grooming&template=public-websites-intake.md&title=%3CType+of+Request%3E+from+%3CTeam%3E)
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### CAIA a11y tasks
### CAIA content tasks
- [ ] https://github.com/department-of-veterans-affairs/va.gov-team/issues/79641
- [ ] https://github.com/department-of-veterans-affairs/va.gov-team/issues/88268
strelichl commented 5 months ago

@gmaciolek following up with our timing on this: our plan is to start work next week and hope to share with your team by Wednesday 4/10. Thanks!

katherine-fung commented 5 months ago

Hi @gmaciolek,

Thanks for your patience with this request! Our content recommendation is:

[Header] We've recorded a potential start date for your benefits

When you apply for pension benefits online, we automatically record your intent to file. This means we record the date you start your application as the potential start date for your benefits.

You may be able to get payments for the time between your potential start date and the date we approve your application.

You must submit your application by Thursday, March 6th, 2025 at 12:07 p.m. ET to keep your potential start date. Your potential start date resets one year after you start your application.

You don't need to do anything else right now. You can continue to fill out your application.

Let us know if you have any questions. Thanks!

katherine-fung commented 4 months ago

@juliepedtke @jstrothman @l-sinreich,

I'm noting here that per Slack, I'm holding on this work until the product team circles back and confirms with CAIA the business requirements for the alert (including 1. what states of the alert you require, and 2. what information you need these alerts to provide to the user).

When you get back to us, Lily and A will slot the work in with our other priorities accordingly. Thanks.

cc @aprocik1 @strelichl

katherine-fung commented 4 months ago

Noting that designer @echin393 and I spoke about the possible states of the ITF alert and what may happen in the backend for these states. She says that the team is still discussing what happens when a user returns to the form and their ITF has expired. She'll keep me posted about what they decide. When this is confirmed, she'll let me know and I'll return to this copy to refine it. I also let her know that I've drafted copy for some of the ITF alert states in ticket 79641.

cc @aprocik1 @strelichl @juliepedtke

echin393 commented 4 months ago

Thanks @katherine-fung! While the team is finalizing a couple policy questions, I gathered some initial considerations on these drafts:

1. ITF start date not always the same as application start date

This means we record the date you start your application as the potential start date for your benefits.

This statement is accurate for the first state (if the user has no previous ITF) but not the second state. If they have a previous ITF, or if we're unsure whether a previous ITF exists, we'll continue to hold any existing ITF start date, which may not be the application start date.

The language that 526 drafted is more accurate, but I also know we want to steer away from mentioning ITF because it creates confusion for veterans.

If you’ve already notified VA of your intent to file, we’ll continue to hold that date as the potential start date for your benefits.

2. Potential payments with potential benefits

You may be able to get payments for the time between this date and the date we approve your application.

There is a possibility that VA rejects the veteran's application. I can see a challenge here where we want to motivate users to start the app, while also being transparent that if VA approves it, you could get retroactive payments, although that may not instill much confidence.

And a couple questions for my context on content standards:

katherine-fung commented 4 months ago

Hi @echin393,

For #1, I can continue to refine this copy once we pick up this work again.

For #2, we lead into this sentence by saying, "If we approve your application, the potential start date for your benefits is Wednesday, March 6, 2024.

You may be able to get payments for the time between this date and the date we approve your application."

I think the italicized phrase is sufficient to let the user know this only applies if VA approves your application. Let me know if you have other thoughts.

And on the other questions:

echin393 commented 4 months ago

This is great! Thanks for the quick feedback.

echin393 commented 2 days ago

Hi @katherine-fung , we’d like to get your feedback on the content for our upcoming research study: https://app.mural.co/t/departmentofveteransaffairs9999/m/departmentofveteransaffairs9999/1713384778236/cb7811f7fc7d62be8ebfcf962519f055c9df98e6?wid=0-1724791584280

Directions are in the Mural board, but just to reiterate – the screenshots are from production (a mix of our current experience on Pension and the current ITF experience on 526), and we’d like to get your guidance on the proposed content and questions. Feel free to provide the feedback either in this ticket or in the board directly. And if you have any questions or would like to discuss this over a call, let me know.

katherine-fung commented 2 days ago

Thanks @echin393 - I'll review the board the content this week. When do you need this feedback by? I think we should have a call to discuss these issues/questions, and others that might come up in my review. Or let me know if the below makes sense and we can discuss async here:

We would welcome any and all research about Veterans' understanding of verified accounts! We saw the need to add this detail to the resource page because technically, Veterans can start the pension form and the form won't submit an ITF on their behalf if they're not verified. It would be misleading to only say that starting a pension form automatically generates an ITF. We don't want people thinking that they submitted an ITF if they actually haven't.

If someone signs in and their account isn't verified, I would think they would need more context or a link somewhere to learn more about verified accounts. I know you worked with @laurwill on the sign in widget copy, which mentions verified accounts. How does the widget copy explain verified accounts?

An intent to file ensures that you don’t lose out on any benefits, no matter how long it takes for you to complete your application or for us to process your claim.

echin393 commented 2 days ago

We don't have targeted deadlines for this research study, so I'll schedule a meeting for us to discuss next week, and feel free to move it further out if you find that you need more time.

In terms of your questions:

  1. Good catch – screen 1.1 assumes that the user is both authenticated and verified with LOA2/3, so an ITF can be established for them. I updated the use cases to clarify that we're referring to "unverified" as having level of access (LOA) 1, and "verified" as having LOA 2/3. The last two variants are outdated from before that assumption was made, so feel free to ignore them.

  2. Thanks for clarifying! We're hesitating to mention identity at this point in their journey because we assume intent to file is already a complex concept for Veterans to grasp, but we'll include questions about identity verification in our conversation guide to validate how familiar Veterans are with the concept and how it might impact the usability of our flow.

  3. Yes, we've confirmed with our engineering team that we'll know what the user's LOA is after they sign in. So if they're already verified, we won't need to introduce verification to them. Messaging for unverified accounts (or messaging about verification) is out of scope for this research study so that we can focus on how to best communicate the benefits of ITF. We're currently investigating complexity on the back-end for this scenario, and our solution will be informed by what we learn after the study is complete.

  4. The bolded text being potentially misleading makes sense. I'll await your suggestions for next week but will workshop alternatives in the meantime. Feel free to ask more questions async if that's useful. Thanks again, @katherine-fung !