Copyedit batch of pages about benefits for dependents

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Copyedit batch of pages about benefits for dependents #81742

Closed laurwill closed 1 month ago

laurwill commented 5 months ago

This ticket will track copyediting for a batch of 8 new page drafts about 3 related programs:

CHAMPVA
Spina bifida benefits
Children of Women Vietnam Veterans benefits

I'll post each draft here as it's ready for copyedit, and Sara will check them off as she finishes each one:

[x] Spina bifida page in benefit hub.docx
[x] CWVV page in benefit hub
[x] RS14 SBHCBP and CWVV Q&As
[x] RS15_File a claim for SB and CWVV.docx
[x] RS13_Meds by Mail_Draft.docx
[x] RS11_File a CHAMPVA claim_Draft.docx
[x] RS12 - CHAMPVA Q&As_Draft.docx
[x] CHAMPVA main page updates.docx

laurwill commented 5 months ago

@saratorres2 posting the first 2 pages in this set ready for your copyedit:

And some more specific instructions here:

Please do a general copyedit for errors and alignment with VA site style.
These programs are very closely related, so we want to use consistent language to describe the parts of the programs that overlap. (They do have some important differences, which is why we have 2 pages instead of 1)
These 2 pages will be in the main family member benefit hub, so you can preview how they look in Drupal by searching the H1 in the content search.
For now, please track any suggested changes in the Word docs on Sharepoint. We'll transfer changes into the Drupal drafts later.

Let me know if you have any questions!

laurwill commented 5 months ago

Hi again @saratorres2 , I added 2 more docs to the top section — these are the 2 resources and support pages related to the spina bifida and CWVV programs. These pages aren't in Drupal. Let's have you start with this batch of 4 closely related documents and then check in before you start on the rest of the set. Thank you!

laurwill commented 5 months ago

Hi @saratorres2 ! One more ready for you — I'll post the last two shortly. RS13_Meds by Mail_Draft.docx

laurwill commented 5 months ago

All posted now! The Meds by Mail page applies to all 3 programs, and the last 3 pages in the list are all about the CHAMPVA program.

saratorres2 commented 5 months ago

@laurwill All pages have been copy edited. I've left a few queries here and there to clarify wording, and corrected a few punctuation errors.

laurwill commented 5 months ago

Thanks so much Sara! @DanielleThierryUSDSVA just tagging you for awareness — I'll reconcile these edits Monday morning, and then we can send the R&S pages to Kelly to build in Drupal.

laurwill commented 5 months ago

Hi @DanielleThierryUSDSVA , the batch of community care pages is ready for you to review.

These 3 benefit detail pages are already in Drupal, I just need to update to match Word docs:

And these R&S pages are ready for Kelly to build in Drupal:

laurwill commented 1 month ago

Closing! These are now in SME review.