Midpoint Review - Content - Iterate Innovate Run, Performance Dashboard, NA #67917

[rferguson13]

Next Steps for the VFS team

• [ ] Assign this ticket to the team member(s) responsible for addressing feedback provided by Platform.
• [ ] Comment on this ticket:
  • If the Platform reviewer has any Thoughts/Questions that require responses.
  • When Must feedback has been incorporated. As appropriate, link to any other GitHub issues or PRs related to this feedback.
  • When Should/Consider feedback has been incorporated, or if any feedback will not be addressed. As appropriate, link to any other GitHub issues or PRs related to this feedback.
• [ ] Questions? For the most timely response, comment on Slack in your team channel tagging @platform-governance-team-members.
• [ ] Close the ticket when all feedback has been addressed.

Thoughts/questions

Looking good! Please let me know if you have any questions.

Feedback

Practice areas will document their feedback on the VFS-provided artifacts following the Must, Should, and Consider Framework. Platform Governance reviewers may also provide additional notes that don’t comment on the artifacts themselves but are important for implementation (eg. engineering/coding notes).

Must

• Highlights section - The user finds the following sentence: "The VA is committed to providing world class and timely healthcare..." There should be a hyphen: world-class. Please revise to: "The VA is committed to providing world-class and timely healthcare..."
• Throughout the prototype: logged in versus signed in - There are several instances where the user finds "logged in" used instead of "signed in." According to the Style Guide, we use "sign in/sign out" instead of "log in/log out." Please revise to "signed in."
• Usage details - The user finds the subheading "Total signed in sessions." There is a hyphen missing: "signed-in." Please revise to: "Total signed-in sessions."

Governance team actions

• [ ] Format feedback as individual tasks (check boxes)
• [ ] Assign this ticket to the VFS team member that opened the Slack request
• [ ] Add the VFS team product label
• [ ] Add the VFS team the feature label (if applicable)
• [ ] Add the touchpoint labels
• [ ] Add the practice area labels
• [ ] Add the Collaboration Cycle initiative milestone
• [ ] Add the Collaboration Cycle initiative epic

[raquelou]

Updates have been made to designs