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Review FAR V2 #84087

Open aprocik1 opened 1 month ago

aprocik1 commented 1 month ago

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This ticket is track work related to reviewing Find a Rep (FAR) V2. Specifically, the product team has asked for a review of the definition.

We were able to connect with OGC in our demo today, regarding the new definition for Find a Representative and the goal of obtaining their approval. The ARM team also has some feedback, I'll summarize both here:

OGC Feedback:

  1. The first paragraph is too brief, and is loosing the specificities of each representative type. The initial suggestions from Jonathan are pulled from our FAQ content; OGC would like to align content when possible to maintain consistency across the site.
  2. No concerns with the second paragraph.

ARM feedback:

  1. Would prefer not to have a sentence start with "And" in the second paragraph.

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aprocik1 commented 1 month ago

@oddball-lindsay, I misunderstood Jonathan's original feedback on the FAR V2 definition. I've updated my recommendation on page 2 of this document: https://dvagov.sharepoint.com/:w:/s/SitewideCAIA/Ef2GutlOSbJGpMlprrvxp5EBHJf5PpAjZGOW2UrjeBC2rA?e=3XaHCw

Let me know what you think. Thanks!

oddball-lindsay commented 1 month ago

Thank you @aprocik1! I connected with the team and we'd like to present the "alternative option" to OGC for approval. Our reasoning: