Seems to fail the "ELI ~ 10" test pretty badly, since I'm 28 who isn't a beginner (though far from an expert) on socialist thought and I've got... absolutely no Earthly clue what the darn diddly you're trying to say with that. I've Googled the word heterodox and the definition of the word didn't help, neither did the Wikipedia page on the word, and Googling "Heterodox Fascism" leads to two top results from what appears to be a reactionary blog whining about social movements on college campuses. If I can't figure out what you are trying to say as someone with at least base level knowledge on the topic at hand, and maybe more importantly existing socialist leanings, even after a few Google searches to figure it out... I doubt that a 101 beginner with no knowledge, an existing aversion to socialist ideas, and no desire to look up the word will figure it out.
I figure you should either define the word or replace it with something easier to understand. I'd suggest something but like I said I myself can't figure out what you mean.
Seems to fail the "ELI ~ 10" test pretty badly, since I'm 28 who isn't a beginner (though far from an expert) on socialist thought and I've got... absolutely no Earthly clue what the darn diddly you're trying to say with that. I've Googled the word heterodox and the definition of the word didn't help, neither did the Wikipedia page on the word, and Googling "Heterodox Fascism" leads to two top results from what appears to be a reactionary blog whining about social movements on college campuses. If I can't figure out what you are trying to say as someone with at least base level knowledge on the topic at hand, and maybe more importantly existing socialist leanings, even after a few Google searches to figure it out... I doubt that a 101 beginner with no knowledge, an existing aversion to socialist ideas, and no desire to look up the word will figure it out.
I figure you should either define the word or replace it with something easier to understand. I'd suggest something but like I said I myself can't figure out what you mean.