Grammar fixes, recommendations, warnings, etc.

[temtemy]

• Added spaces missing before "("
• Added warning not to use Tor for torrents
• Added recommendation to use onion services as much as possible instead of clearnet
• Added more recommendations for "favorite apps and services"
• Removed extra spaces in parenthesis (like "( Sample )")
• Fix typo that Nokia "fell from 98th place to 5th place", used the citation from the English Wikipedia article of Nokia
• Used the official capitalizations of software, corporations, websites, etc.
• Capitalized "american", "russian", etc. Fixed "Peoples" to "People's" (regarding the official name of China)
• "TOR" --> "Tor", "vpn" --> "VPN"

[dessalines]

I'll get to this soon.