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Emily's comments on the Federation Manager page #13

Closed dhwalker closed 6 years ago

dhwalker commented 6 years ago
Subject: RA and FM

Mon, 21 May 2018 08:55:22 -0700 Emily Eisbruch emily@internet2.edu David Walker dwalker@internet2.edu, Nick Roy nroy@internet2.edu, Dean Woodbeck woodbeck@internet2.edu

Hi

I would suggest thinking about getting rid of the abbreviations for FM and RA on this page and just spelling those out all the way through

https://spaces.internet2.edu/x/hofNAQ

Emily Eisbruch, Work Group Lead, Trust and Identity Internet2 emily@internet2.edu office: +1-734-352-4996 | mobile +1-734-730-5749

From: David Walker Sent: Thursday, May 10, 2018 12:02 PM To: Nick Roy; Dean Woodbeck; Ann West; Tom Barton; John Krienke; Angi Sizemore; Emily Eisbruch Cc: David Walker Subject: The promised backlog

Everyone,

As promised, here's a backlog of content reviews for the InCommon Federation wiki space. There are a number of them (though some very small), so I've divided them into two groups with staggered due dates for your feedback. Of course, you're welcome to get everything out of the way in one shot.

Responses by Thursday, 5/17
    Review - Federation Services (This is the one I sent out last week.  Thanks to those of you who have already responded.)
    Review - Federation Technical Guide
    Review - How-to articles
    Review - Identity and Access Management
    Review - Initiatives 
Responses by  Tuesday, 5/22
    Review - Metadata Administration
    Review - Recommended Practices
    Review - SAML

Ann has suggested getting community feedback on what we're doing here. I wouldn't want to do a general solicitation until the end (early-mid June?), as the links among pages don't stay within specific sections, so people will be reviewing pages we haven't gotten to yet. We could, though, add some new-to-InCommon people to these section-focused (and time-bounded) requests for feedback. Do any of you have thoughts of who we could invite?

As always, thanks for putting time into this.

David

On 05/02/2018 03:27 PM, Nick Roy wrote:

Hi David, I'll try to get to these reviews yet this week.

Nick

On 5/2/18 12:06 AM, David Walker wrote:

FYI, I've finished revising the eduGAIN https://spaces.internet2.edu/display/InCFederation/eduGAIN and Federation Manager https://spaces.internet2.edu/display/InCFederation/Federation+Manager sections the InCommon Federation wiki space. Notes are in Review - eduGAIN https://spaces.internet2.edu/x/aweMBw and Review - Federation Manager https://spaces.internet2.edu/x/gQeMBw.

I've also reviewed the Federation Services https://spaces.internet2.edu/display/InCFederation/Federation+Services section; proposed changes and a couple of questions in red are in Review - Federation Services https://spaces.internet2.edu/display/%7Edwalker@internet2.edu/Review+-+Federation+Services. I realize you've got Global Summit coming up, but if you can take a look before you leave for San Diego, I could make the revisions next week. In any event, I'll keep reviewing more sections next week, so expect a backlog.

David

On 04/27/2018 03:56 PM, Dean Woodbeck wrote:

I finished reviewing this, too. FWIW, I agree with gutting the eduGAIN section, too. I think someone with the technical knowledge could probably shorten the delegated admin stuff, but I'm not that guy. > > Dean > > On 4/27/18, 5:48 PM, "Nick Roy" nroy@internet2.edu wrote: > I've put comments on the review pages, also I agree with gutting the eduGAIN section.

Best,

Nick

On 4/27/18 10:55 AM, David Walker wrote:

I'm going to give you all some more time to review what I plan to do for the eduGAIN https://spaces.internet2.edu/display/InCFederation/eduGAIN and Federation Manager <https://spaces.internet2.edu/display/InCFederation/Federation+Manager sections the InCommon Federation wiki space, as I need input on a number of questions, which I have now highlighted in bold red in: