Edits, to dos, and suggestions

[djplaner]

Each of the following comments will identify suggested changes/updates to the website.

Will use the following naming scheme

• home page - for the home page
• category (aka first level) pages - the pages linked to from the top menu (gardening, design, projects etc)
• item (aka second level) pages - that pages contained within each category (e.g. each individual gardening or design service; different projects)

Problems for me to fix

• on contact (and apparently all first level pages) page logo link stays on current page - not home page

[djplaner]

Contact page

Replace

• dummy values for phone and email address.
• the "lorem ipsum" text with something explaining
  • how clients should contact you,
  • what they should expect
• (or remove) the opening hours section - perhaps explaining why opening hours don't make sense in the new explanatory text

[djplaner]

Item pages for Gardening (aka garden services)

Too consistently "negative" for most of the services ???

The blurb - esp. the first sentences - for the first two services (mowing and weeding) have some variety in intent/theme. First talks about quiet electric mowers. Weeding about how you hate it.

But the next three tend to continue the "you hate it or can't do it" theme. MIght that not create the impression of people that they're are accepting failure by employing you? Might challenge some of the people that were really good gardeners but are now can't do it.

Perhaps some more variety? e.g.

• Garden beds - just remove the first sentence
• hedges - maybe focus more on the importance of trimming to keep hedges healthy and beautiful

[djplaner]

Projects - items pages

first paragraphs

WOrked on duck meadows -- thoughts?

Finish Narelle's renovation

Only you can do this.