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Current draft: https://github.com/dondi/GRNsight/wiki/2021-Undergraduate-Research-Symposium-Abstract —to be revised by @Onariaginosa, @igreen1, and @ahmad00m for subsequent review by @dondi and @kdahlquist before 2/5.
@kdahlquist @dondi Please review the changes made ! Thanks
Thanks! Here are my notes so far:
master
, run the test suite on that, then go back to beta
and run the test suite on that to see how many tests were added). Also by "refactoring," did you simplify? Consolidate? Debug? All of the above?Hope that's useful!
I agree with @dondi. I also want to note that the abstract submission form has a 100 character limit, so the title will need to be shortened.
@kdahlquist @dondi We updated the abstract and changed what was requested. Please advise. Thanks!
Thanks for the quick turnaround!
I think the content looks good now and we just need one last pass of wordsmithing. Those last sentences don’t flow for me upon reading—they feel like bullet points but they should read more narratively. Put another way, each sentence feels isolated, not moving from one to the next. The 2nd and 3rd sentences are a slight exception, thanks to that “Additionally” glue word. Unfortunately we can’t really put “additionally” before every sentence 😅
We improved the import and export functionality. We added 28 new tests to increase user awareness of errors and warnings in the import and export process, as well as consolidated and debugged the testing suite. Additionally, we updated the User Interface to fix graph edge display bugs, as well as viewport selection and movement issues. We explored GRNsight's compatibility issues with uncommon operating systems and web browsers. We updated libraries to maintain GRNsight's compatibility with modern web browsers and take advantage of new features available.
If anyone wants to take a stab at it, go ahead. I’ll mull over it a bit and give it a shot later if no one has yet.
Alternatively, if it’s just me and it otherwise reads OK to everyone else, then I’m good with it 😂
Oh oops and the title still needs to be shortened. I'm counting 122 characters. Will explore that too.
on the title, i removed the 'a' before web application
which should just get us to the character count.
Alternatively, we could probably changed 'user interface' to just 'interface' or 'user interface' to 'graphics' as we did technically improve the graphics (by fixing the various bugs in the graph display and viewport)
About the word smithing, I agree. There are a lot of 'we verbed'. I can try to edit this tomorrow morning, but I have a midterm in the morning so I'll be studying the rest of the evening.
I edited it. The title is now "Testing/UI Annexes to GRNsight: a Web Application for Visualizing Models of Gene Regulatory Networks". I also made the passage more cohesive. @dondi @kdahlquist please advise!
I did an editing run on the abstract, adding the idea of Excel workbook validation to the rationale for the updates we made. I've substantially changed the title. I don't usually approve of using abbreviations in titles, but if they are going to limit us to 100 characters, they are asking for it :) I think the new title better summarizes the work you all did. The title is 97 characters and the abstract body is 242 words.
This version is OK for submitting, pending @dondi's approval.
Works for me! I substituted “To this end” with “Along the way” to make it a little different from the earlier “Toward this end” but that’s it. Ready to ship :shipit: 👍
@kdahlquist Apparently these are the final choices…“in the classroom” never did get edited out…any preference on the format?
I'm OK with poster or oral. Usually we have seniors to oral, so poster, maybe?
Kk, I will select poster then!
2021 Undergraduate Research Symposium Abstract.pdf Is this fine for the pdf version of the abstracr? @kdahlquist @dondi
PDF looks good to me @Onariaginosa
Cool. I will submit now!
Changed title to "poster preparation".
Biology synchronous session is targeted for 3/19 Friday late afternoon. We'll target a draft by around 3/10 with finalization 3/17.
@Onariaginosa @igreen1 @ahmad00m created a poster draft for URS. It is attached below in pdf and powerpoint format. Igbinedion_Green_Mersaghian_LMU_Symposium_2021.pptx.pdf Igbinedion_Green_Mersaghian_LMU_Symposium_2021.pptx
Details of the Biology URS session
I will share the Zoom link via e-mail, I don't want to put it on a public website.
Some notes from poster review:
Igbinedion_Green_Mersaghian_LMU_Symposium_2021.pptx —small aspect ration/heading changes
A few more notes for new content:
Latest GA data:
Revised version included, mostly periods and hyphens, plus reformatting of References section.
TODO: Include upload numbers in analytics table
Igbinedion_Green_Mersaghian_LMU_SYMPOSIUM_BACKUP_2021.1.pptx
Post-poster finalization action items:
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Fixed Poster, submitted poster, put pdf in documents folder on master, created news item. Will do publications page soon.
Converted the action items to a checklist and at this writing, we just need to do a publication link.
Linked on the Publications page
Link to publication verified at 4/14 meeting.
This fell off my radar, but we'd better talk about this at todays meeting!
On another note--Github has now taken away the assignee list completely! So, now I have to remember people's usernames and type them?