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Minor Spelling and Grammar fixes #18

Closed GoogleCodeExporter closed 8 years ago

GoogleCodeExporter commented 8 years ago
It's really nitpicky, but here's a list of all errors I've seen so far:

1. ReadMe - under Core description, it says "It adds the features found in 
popular first-person-shooter games that were yet missing in New Vegas." The 
word 'yet' is unnecessary. Also occurs in the Installation description.

2. ReadMe - under Cyberware description, it says "Some of mans most 
advanced..." - should say "Some of man's most advanced..." Also occurs in the 
Installation description.

3. ReadMe - under Sprint description, "When bouncing into an oppononent you may 
knock him down if you're Strength is overpowering his." Should read "When 
bouncing into an *opponent* you may knock him down if *your* Strength is 
overpowering his."

4. ReadMe - under Bullet Time description, "Grim Reaper Sprint" should be "Grim 
Reaper's Sprint".

5. ReadMe - under Implant Locations - the Voice Modulator says it is in "Doc 
Mitchells house" - should be "Doc Mitchell's house".

6. ReadMe - under Installation with FOMM - "Add FOmod" should be "Add FOMod" to 
match FOMM.

7. The in-game description of Sub-Dermal Armor has "scrap by" - should be 
"scrape by".

Overall, not too many errors. Will keep my eyes open for anything else.

Original issue reported on code.google.com by mikeke...@gmail.com on 27 Jan 2011 at 4:18

GoogleCodeExporter commented 8 years ago
Don't worry about being nit-picky, anything that's not right is worth reporting.

Original comment by schlangs...@gmail.com on 27 Jan 2011 at 3:12

GoogleCodeExporter commented 8 years ago
Confirmed, all these errors fixed in r500.

Original comment by mikeke...@gmail.com on 30 Jan 2011 at 2:49

GoogleCodeExporter commented 8 years ago

Original comment by schlangs...@gmail.com on 30 Jan 2011 at 11:14