drakelimkiat
commented
6 years ago Improvements: First block of text was too quick Text are blurry (Try white text on black background) Too many words on most of the steps Most blocks go by too quickly, give more time for players to read (or a button to click to go next step)
(Bold text are what should be added as explanation) "Try opening the fridge ... with trigger button (index finger)" We will instruct them to hold the controller with index finger on the trigger and thumbs on the facepads. "Try taking out rice ... with the same trigger button" To remind players that the button used to interact with fridge is the same used to take food "Chop the lettuce ... by doing a chopping motion on the lettuce" Players need to know that they have to do a chopping motion Gordon Ramsay
Good: Arrows are nice and clear! Person moving around to direct is good.
To Do: Skipping steps break the tutorial (even slightly like putting a patty before person says "Put a patty") Teach trash / put food back in fridge Teach loading of gun Teach looking at gun for food type and ammo count information Teach switching of food ammo Teach shooting at enemy Teach complaints bar information Tell players menu is on the fridge Add music and voiceover
Can have arrows indicating where the food should be placed Voiceover telling what the player should do