Section 4: A lot more meat here. Maybe this should be where it starts, with a few intro sentence replacing the 1st 3 sections. (Needs a lot of – easy - word-smithing, though.)

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Closed dazzaji closed 10 years ago

h0pbeat commented 10 years ago

It is section Personal Data: Emergence of a New Asset Class (Thomas)

dazzaji commented 10 years ago

I'm not sure I agree this should be the start of the article and the word smithing is well underway as part of the general edits.