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IETF SHMOO working group draft on running an IETF Hackathon

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Address comments from Erik Kline #47

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eckelcu commented 2 years ago

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S5.8

Consider expanding "IPv6 PD" to "IPv6 Prefix Delegation".

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S1

"who are not necessary developers" -> "who are not necessarily developers"

S2.1

"learn more about projects and team" -> "learn more about projects and the team", or "learn more about projects and teams", perhaps

eckelcu commented 2 years ago

Addressed by #50