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IETF SHMOO working group draft on running an IETF Hackathon
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Address comments from John Scudder #48

Closed eckelcu closed 2 years ago

eckelcu commented 2 years ago

COMMENT:

Thanks for this interesting document.

Minor:

  1. In §5.1,

Team. From the Datatracker menu, navigate to "Other" -> "Active Teams" -> "Hackathon". Here exists a Datatracker space for the

But when I look at the Datatracker "Other" menu, there's nothing about teams. I did eventually find it under "Groups" -> "Other" -> "Active Teams" -> "hackathon" (in lower case :-) So in short, "Groups" was missing at the beginning of the path.

Nits:

  1. In §2.1,

As the IETF Hackathon serves as the start of the overall IETF meeting, we aim to strike a compromise that provides enjoy time to get valuable work accomplished without exhausting themselves before the main IETF meeting even starts.

There's something broken in this sentence but I can't quite make out what it is. Maybe "enjoy" is supposed to be "everybody"?

  1. Again in §2.1,

and participants time to socialize and learn more about projects and team they might want to join. The kickoff presentation and formalities are kept to minimum to leave as much time as possible for team to work together with their team on their projects. The

s/team/teams/g (I guess, although that's a lot of "teams" in a row -- maybe the middle "team" is actually "them"?)

  1. In §2.5,

most convenient for them. The kickoff and closing sessions were schedule to align with the time frame established for the IETF 108

s/schedule/scheduled/

eckelcu commented 2 years ago

Addressed by #51

eckelcu commented 2 years ago

I messed up a merge and removed some of the changes made to address John's comments.

eckelcu commented 2 years ago

Remaining comments addressed by #57