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EEW Report Louisiana 2nd Congressional District #83

Closed crgreenleaf closed 4 years ago

crgreenleaf commented 4 years ago

┆Issue is synchronized with this Trello card

crgreenleaf commented 4 years ago

https://www.canva.com/design/DAD8DeOt_ds/G8Gl4K9XdLUlBrGO_-UhOw/edit

calderEDJ commented 4 years ago

https://www.canva.com/design/DAD8DeOt_ds/7JttmhvLBLUGzhQbK8HMXA/view?utm_content=DAD8DeOt_ds&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link&utm_source=sharebutton I'm at a bit of a stand still on this. All the data from the notebooks used at the Stonybrook event are in the report, and I've gotten some info in the Research and Conceptualization track regarding congressional representatives and their campaign donors, but I'm not sure where to go next. @ericnost @Frijol any ideas for the data viz section or edits on the report-making section? @saraannwylie @lourdesvera do either of you have an notes / suggestions on what to add to research and contextualization? I have a line of communication with Sharon Lerner of The Intercept; she would likely have some resources/info specific to this district.

Frijol commented 4 years ago

What's the ultimate goal/audience of this report? This is a sample report for what we're intending to make in general?

ericnost commented 4 years ago

Hi @calderEDJ - This looks great!!! Some thoughts - do we need a separate data viz section? Seems to me the data viz is happening in the "report-making" section itself.

Maybe we could figure out some sort of map showing total number of violations over time? What variable of interest do you think, based on your research, would be best to map? I can help do that.

In general, it seems a little weird to have separate "research and context", "data viz" and "storytelling" sections. To me, those 4 parts of the report-making model are just that - components that combine to provide the information in the report rather than structuring it. What if the report was structured around questions/answers?:

ericnost commented 4 years ago

(I might be misunderstanding something about the nature of the different tracks, but it seems like it would be valuable if they were synthesized for the report rather than separate.)

saraannwylie commented 4 years ago

It seems pretty difficult to collectively edit canva...Thoughts on this? Can you export a pdf that we can mark up? But in the long term should we find something that's easier for multiple people to work on? What do you think @crgreenleaf @Frijol @calderEDJ?

I agree with Eric's big picture comments. My thoughts for this is that it's an example of what a congressional report could look like, so I think we remove the mention of the tracks and probably the EWW diagram. Then I suggest moving up the information on who are the representatives for this district to before the findings.

The information about what EWW is and why enforcement is important could probably be merged into 1 page.

We should aim for something that is overall in the 5-7 pages range, because people won't read much after that.

I don't think we should include their rankings from other organizations unless we are clearly critiquing them because it's potentially confusing.

We need to work on the legends and axis to make sure that the charts are clearly understandable.

Also we need to rerun this report with the correct date range @ericnost could you help @calderEDJ with that?

saraannwylie commented 4 years ago

@calderEDJ can we find time tomorrow to work on a revision of this report? How about 11?

crgreenleaf commented 4 years ago

Re: difficulty of collective canva editing - there is a way to share a version one can make comments on, versus just sharing the overview.

ericnost commented 4 years ago

Also we need to rerun this report with the correct date range @ericnost could you help @calderEDJ with that?

The EPA has stated that any data prior to November 2000 should be treated as ¯_(ツ)_/¯: https://github.com/edgi-govdata-archiving/EEW_Planning/issues/96#issuecomment-633643929

So, we have said we will only look at 2001+ @calderEDJ I think you can make that change in Excel by just deleting anything before 2001.

We have revised the Cross-Program notebook to show only 2001+

mraisle commented 4 years ago

@calderEDJ is there a place where the text is? Only link I see here is canva

lourdesvera commented 4 years ago

We decided to make this into a sample report to post on our blog and give to potential partner organizations.

It might be a good idea to send this report to communities in Louisiana.

saraannwylie commented 4 years ago

I can send this to Healthy Gulf in Lousiana @lourdesvera and @calderEDJ ? I'd like to get it ready for that. @calderEDJ could you put this in a draft or comment-able mode in Canva so it's easier to share feedback?

saraannwylie commented 4 years ago

@calderEDJ @crgreenleaf can we build an EDGI team on Canva so we can co-edit documents?

saraannwylie commented 4 years ago

Notes:

Text: "This willful, calculated harm is especially insidious because it represents an attitude of racial superiority that cannot be tolerated." Not sure we can prove "willful and calculated" also "attitude of racial superiority that cannot be tolerated" seems awkward better to name racism or white supremacy directly? Suggest revise to "the failure to abide by or enforcement environmental regulatory permits is a cause and consequence of environmental racism. We share these reports to reveal the vast gaps in environmental enforcement, the inadequacy of current data systems and to call regulators and industry to account."

saraannwylie commented 4 years ago
lourdesvera commented 4 years ago

Who else should we assign to this. @mraisle it seems your hands are full? @maalvikabhat? I can work on it too

mraisle commented 4 years ago

Hey @lourdesvera thanks for flagging! @calderEDJ and I met about this and then haven't spent time addressing Sara's comments. Addressing these would help us in thinking through the Sunrise report that we're a bit stuck on at the moment, also.

mraisle commented 4 years ago

Question for @lourdesvera and @saraannwylie, after our conversation last week about our hesitation in including EJ metrics in the Sunrise notebook, do we have similar hesitations in expanding the EJ emphasis in a template report? Or should we pursue that?

maalvikabhat commented 4 years ago

I can work on this!

maalvikabhat commented 4 years ago

finished a EJ template!