ejikeugba / serp

Smooth Effects on Response Penalty for CLM
https://ejikeugba.github.io/serp
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Suggestion related to the manuscript #7

Closed bernardsilenou closed 2 years ago

bernardsilenou commented 3 years ago

Here are some suggestions to improve the manuscript.

  1. Reference section:
  2. Table 1 and Figure can be made to be more self explanatory, there are abbreviations (, vglm, NPOM, lambda, ..) that are explained in the main text only. Please can you add a footer for the aberrations to table 1? The same also applies to the figure 1, you can give the full names.
  3. Should line 64 be A Minimal Example ?, “m” is lower case.
  4. Can the section called “Statement of Need” be renamed “State of the Field” ? Since this section describe how this software compares to other commonly-used packages.
  5. You can add another section below the introduction called “Statement of need” that clearly states what problems the software is designed to solve and who are the target audience. Part of the content is already mentioned in the second paragraph of the summary section.

    openjournals/joss-reviews#3705

ejikeugba commented 3 years ago

Thanks for the helpful suggestions.