I made these edits in response to pointed criticism received over email. While I stand by the main thrust of my argument, I agree that prefacing the discussion by highlighting Mukurtu's real accomplishments and contributions makes this more constructive. Hopefully I do this without totally blowing up my word count.
At any rate, more edits based on the emailed discussion to follow.
I made these edits in response to pointed criticism received over email. While I stand by the main thrust of my argument, I agree that prefacing the discussion by highlighting Mukurtu's real accomplishments and contributions makes this more constructive. Hopefully I do this without totally blowing up my word count.
At any rate, more edits based on the emailed discussion to follow.