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static parts of vector.im site
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Single page rebrand #10

Closed neilisfragile closed 6 years ago

neilisfragile commented 6 years ago

Hi @lampholder this is a wip rewrite for vector.im It started as a careers page, but will be modified to serve as the main landing page.

For now, would be very grateful for copy review, things that are missing, things that don't make sense, things that are likely to trigger european land war etc.

(the easiest way to do this is checkout and then just point browser at index.html)

lampholder commented 6 years ago

It looks great! I like all of the copy; the only feedback there would be the reference to Rennes Fr looks a little truncated.

If I were to nitpick, I'd say I think the 'that' in the headline is redundant and adds an unnecessary beat into the sentence; how about 'We believe the future will be open and decentralized'?